Week 9 Story: An alternate ending to the Dice Game

UPDATE - The newest version of this story is here on my portfolio!

When Shakuni challenged Yudhishthira to a game of dice, several thoughts flitted through his mind. The chief thought was that he had heard rumors that Shakuni used special die, which gave him the advantage in every game played, and that was quickly followed by the thought that as a kshatriya, he could not refuse the offer to play the game of dice, leaving him in quite a sticky situation.

He reluctantly agreed to play against Shakuni, hoping with all of his heart that the rumors of Shakuni’s special die were false. His hopes were dashed, however, when he lost all of his possessions and wealth in the first game. They were crushed even further when he lost himself and the rest of the Pandavas. He wasn’t sure what would happen next – he had lost himself and the Pandavas – what else was there to lose if he was lost and his wealth and possessions were also already lost?

Yudhishthira was stuck. From the gleam in Shakuni’s eyes and his whisperings to Duryodhani, they were up to something more, which meant that he did have something more to lose. He looked around and saw his brothers, some of their comrades, and all of their expensive, silk clothing and assorted gold jewelry. What did they want? Did they want the comrades of the Pandavas to pledge loyalty to the Kauravas?

Shakuni finally ceased his whispering and turned to Yudhishthira with a smile. “For this next round, if you win, you can take back your wealth, possessions, and your ownership of yourselves. But if you lose, you turn over Draupadi,” he stated. Yudhishthira could not believe what he had just heard. The stakes of this game was his wife? The beloved wife of all the Pandavas? He couldn’t stop playing this stupid game and had already gambled everything that he had, including himself, and now he had to give up the person most dear in his life?

He looked over to the rest of his brothers, who stared back at him hopelessly, and then looked at Draupadi, who was glaring at him, as if to say, “how could you get yourself into this mess?”

He had no other alternative. He briefly looked up to the heavens and prayed to any of the gods who were there listening, to please spare his wife this dishonor.

He turned back to Shakuni and nodded at him to commence the game. The die were rolled, and after what seemed like an eternity (but was likely only a brief second), the die turned over and revealed Yudhishthira as the winner of the game! He had just been restored his possessions, wealth, and self-ownership, but most importantly, had not lost his beloved wife!

An innocuous pair of dice [source]

Author’s Note – I’m a huge fan of happy endings, and although I know that the Mahabharata ultimately has a happy ending, I hated how the story of Yudhishthira and the dice game had ended! I really disliked that Draupadi was won by Shakuni, and how he and the Kauravas tried to dishonor her by having her disrobe in front of everyone. I wanted to remake the story, so that she wasn’t won, and also include more of Yudhishthira’s thoughts. When I researched the story to refresh my memory of it, I found out that the dice game that they were playing was a game that kshatriyas (which Yudhishthira was) could not refuse to play if offered. This really clarified things for me, since I was originally very irritated at Yudhishthira for continuing to play this stupid game after he kept losing, not understanding that he had to do so.

Bibliography - PDE Mahabharata. Multiple Authors. Link.

Comments

  1. Hi Deborah! I really liked how you put this story into Yudhishthira's point-of-view. It made it easier to sympathize with his character hearing about how he was reluctant but could not refuse to play the game, how upset he was at hearing he would have to give up his wife if he lost. You really enlightened his character by giving him this chance to speak to the audience himself. Great work!

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  2. Hey there Deborah! Like Lauren Skaggs said above, I also enjoyed how you were able to change up the point of view into the eyes of Yudhishthira. I have to admit that this was one of the stories that we read that made me extremely upset. I hated the way that Draupadi was the one who really suffered the most in all of this mess. However, I like the changes that you made in the story and how you added another layer of interest.

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  3. Hi Deborah! Your story was great! I liked that you cut out the weird, sexist business with Draupadi. You did a great job of creating suspense with the rolling of the dice. So much was resting on those dice rolls, which amplified the suspense. It was also nice to hear Yudhishthira's worries and understand how he felt throughout the story. Good job!

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  4. Hi Deborah! I enjoyed reading your story! You gave a happy twist to an otherwise sad part of the Mahabharata. I really liked that you cut out the part of Draupadi getting disrobed in front of all the men. I really hated it so much. As Jessica mentioned above me, you created amazing suspense with the rolling of the die. Great job!

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  5. Hey Deborah! I was relieved to continue reading on to find that this story had a happy ending! For a split second I was worried that they would lose his wife and felt bad for him. Maybe this will be a lesson or two for the brothers to not place bets on things that they hold near and dear to them. However, we all know how that plays out as we continue to read the stories about them. Anyway, thank you for a happy ending!

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  6. Hey Deborah!
    I really enjoyed reading your story! I like the fact you gave the story a happy ending. I agree with the you on not liking how Draupadi was dishonored by having to undress in front of all those people. It was also nice to get an insight on what Yudhishthira was thinking when he was playing the game. Overall, you did a great job!

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  7. Hey Deborah!
    I like how you took a story and changed the ending to the one you liked better! It had me on the edge of my seat wondering how you would save him from giving up his beloved! Good job writing in those details and keeping in the suspense of the story and yet making it a happy ending! Good job!

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  8. Hey Deborah,
    This was such a great story and I am really glad that I was able to read it. It was really great that you were able to take this story and change the ending to one that you thought was a lot better. This is a great lesson to learn not to place bets on things that are near and dear to you. Great Story!

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